Tuesday, October 7, 2008

blog # 10

chapter 11-12
piggy the partly ghost

they stole my glass wwwaaaaa

they stole my glass (crying) we have to get my glasses back because I'm blind and i won't know what to do I'll just be like a zombie and i meant get hurt because I can't see. Then Ralph said we will go to jack with spear's even piggy when samneric inturped and said no piggy can't have one it would be a diddle. Then I said I'll take the conch it might work and I'll just ask for them back it would be the right thing to do.
so so when we finally got to jack's tribe we got jack out I asked for my glasses because it was the right thing to do is give me the glasses and let us go when raplh yelled something and I fell to my knees and blacked out and when I woke up I saw my self blood face and I noticed i was over my body and i saw samnneric being grabbed and raplh running away after a big battle against jack looked like raplh wounded and running away. i saw samneric go to the fire when i see a figure climbing the edge and i said that has to be ralph because no one would try to keep away from jack's tribe or the feast witch is going on below them. Then samneric were talking to the figure and gave it something and it pointed to a trinket so I went over to that trinket thing and their was raplh sleeping so i was looking around to see if the sun was coming up. so i was watchfor about 6 hours.
Then some uluation was coming from jack's side of the island then their was some smoke and i say some one setting fire to the island and ralph woke up he looked scared then i notice samnericwith jack and his tribe right out side of the tricket and the n i noticed that ralph was sacred and saying stuff but i don't know what he was saying. then i saw some one trying to spear ralph and it loked like he got injured and i laughed alittle becuse i know raplh he won't go down without a fight. then i saw them go back and started pushing bouders. then after that i saw raplh start running for his life to the beach the n he went into a small place to hide i think. then they came by and looked in there and raplh knocked that kid over and he got to the beach and there were marines with big guns and raplh started cry and yelled i'm finally saved.

Wednesday, October 1, 2008

blog #9

where did every body go
Ralph

Stop it piggy says after I spit water at him in the pool. why i said because I'll have to get out and dry my spec. Then he asked where everyone went and he pointed to the platform they must be at the feast with jack should we get them. No i said theirs no point just let them go. then piggy said don't you think we should go. I said I guess. so we went to jacks feast and we have as much meat as I can.when jack asked does anyone want any more.then jack has some water when he asks so who wants to join my tribe. i stood up so angry i was about to charge jack but i couldn't or i was going to die so i just asked why do this. jack says because you had some of my meat. then they started to chant kill the beast cut its throat make him bleed. then something came out of the creeps and went in the horseshoe and was saying that their was a dead man on the hill and they were still chanting kill the beast cut his throat make him bleed bash him in and the beast said one more time dead man on hill and was being speared kicked punched and bitten to death.

chapter 10
where did Simon go

raplh

i think that was Simon how it acted saying something. no it wasn't piggy said. but they killed him and i was in to it i was part of the dance. then piggy said we were scared and it was dark. ok i said we need to relight the fire again. ok so i tell everyone that can watch the fire to make sure theirs smoke and it is still light. so we got allotof fire wood and i was arguing with Sam and ericbout the fire and we decided to not watch it tonight so me samneric and piggy go into the shelters when i wake up to piggy come out side piggy. when piggy wakes up and says is that the beast becuse i don't want him to get me when i said don't move.then it keeped asking for piggy somthing triped over me and i started beating him tell he was bleeding when i got hit and stoip they run away me samneric pulled piggy out of the clopsed shelter to a tree and asked if everyone was all right and eric said i was being kicked in the face when i kneed him in his pills and i thought they won't want to mess with us any time soon when piggy noticed his specs where gone.