Journal Entry
Chapter 1-Is it an Island?
Simon
The group hears some noises that sound like trumpets. We have a meeting after finding what the trumpet-like sounds were. We climb up the mountain to see if the land is an island. On the way up we saw a boulder and we were sniggering with happiness because we went to knock it over the side. So we heaved and hoed until it went to the scar. Once we were done with our break we hiked up through the mountain. Once we got to the top it was like efflorescence. We were thinking of a way down then I proffered the way to go to the scar and then to the platform. On the way down the mountain it was like a glamour of the colors off the bushes and candle buds. About five minutes later they hear squeals and there is a pig caught in the creepers and Jack pulled out his knife and he paused and the animal got away. He said, I was trying to find a place to stab it. On the way to the platform we were immured by the forest. At last when we arrived we had a meeting.
Hamlet
13 years ago
2 comments:
I like that how you summarized all of that chapter in one paragraph and how you just mention the events. What I would say is that try and make it a little longer and try to make it out of simon's perspective more.
1. I like how you summarized the whole chapter into one paragraph. Although you didn't describe it in detail, i like how you told about everything that happened.
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