Chapter 6
Simon
The Beastie
In the middle of the night I hear Sam and Eric talking to Ralp about a Beastie and going on and on and on.... between extremen silence. It seemed interminable that their converstation was so long. The twins are so scared that they can't even walk to the other huts. They had a meeting to discuss about the beast and what to do about it. Jack was mustionous about the beast and saying it can't be on the island because he had searched everywhere on the island. Then he says "There is one place I have not been. It's by the mountainside."
We all picked up a spear and Piaay watched the littlums while they searched for the beast, we were walking to the place that Jack had never been too.
I was walking side by side with Ralph and I was embroiled by being next to him with his hair flickering into my face. We made it to where Jack had not been and there was a lot of gano on the rocks, but no beastie. Jack kept saying this would be a great fort and we should stay here. Then Ralp was wary over the fact that the fire was out and they wanted to stay at the fort.
Chapter 7
Simon
Beast Hunt
It was was so hot, our torn colthes stick to our bodies. All of us just seem too stop and rest on the rocks to get out of the sun. I found Ralph impervious trans, I knew what Ralph was day dreaming about, because it was what all us daydreamed about. What our lives were like before this. Remembering our dun lives before, and how we now realized what we took for granted.
It was at this moment I really saw how brine each us have become. Our hair too long and uncombed, how each of needed a shower. Our clothes so dirty that they were stiff.
Once again, we set off on the beast hunt, but Jack see a chance to hunt a boar. All of us including Ralph went into a windy rage hunting this boar. Ralph was bravado with striking the boar in the face with his spear. But in the end the boar got away. Jack shouts make a ring! This seem to always have a one of us as the pig in the middle of the circle, with all us poking and pushing and screaming, "kill the pig."
Hamlet
13 years ago
2 comments:
Your blog post sound very much like Simon wrote it because you described a lot about what you saw, did and what you said. In the post, you had a few spelling mistakes but nothing that would make it seem boring. I like how you split the two chapters into two diffrent section, it helped me figure out what chapter im reading about.
I like how ypu slpit up the chapters and that gave me a good i dea for my next post. I like how you make that simon was the talking because you made him sound just like a bystander and he gets into any conversation alot. it sound like simon because he is describing how he just notices just the little thing tha nobady else does.
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