I was crying then some one called me i turn around and there was
Dolphus Raymond he said i have something that can settle your stomach scout looked like i should have said no but i did anyway i have a sip and it was coca cola. Then i told scout and she didn't believe me so she had a sip and said ya it is.Then he told us he wants to be called a town drunk because of the way he lives. then i said we need to get back to the court room to see what was happening. Then we got back to are sits and then we asked what happened and it was that we missed almost everything. so i watched and i noticed that attics was questioning the jury it went on so then after that happened the jury went back to deliberate then Cal came in then she had a envelope then she gave it to attics and it said that they didn't know where the kids are and Mr Underwood said their up on the balcony with the colored folks. then
Jem and scout looked like they were going to cry. We went down and
atticus talked to us and he
sayed go home and eat but scout asked but i want to hear what is going to be the verdict but
atticus replied i think it's going to be a long time. so we went back to scouts house then we came back after a hour and we still got are sits but the jury never came out i thought wow this is serious. so i looked around didn't look like much was going on but J
em was looking around then he came back and so did the jury they passed around the
verdict in a
envelope and when it got to the judge he read
guilty guilty guilty.
Jem looked like he was shocked so much he was going to get sick. Then i watched
atticus leave then
followed J
em and scout. we got back to their house then i went to
aunt Rachel's then went to bed and hoped for a new day. When i woke up i went over to scout and
jems house to see what they thought of last night J
em didn't change scout was a little better then we talked with miss
Maudie and
Mr Avery and they were saying that it wasn't right what they did to tom. then ms
Maudie had a
piece of cake for us so she gave us some then went out and we heard that we should go in the house we asked why she said
because Mr
Ewell spit in
atticus's fave and said he was going to kill him. so i was told to go in my
aunts house and J
em and scout went in
theirs i heard a lot of noise coming from
their house when i looked over
every time i saw
Atticus,
Jem, and Scout. i think it was from
atticus to protect him self more but i heard nothing more so i went to sleep then i went with
Jem to learn how to swim.
1 comment:
You did a good job writing with detail and thoughts of Dill. I noticed that there were a lot of uncapitalized words and "I"s. Other than that you made it interesting especially when Dill was sick and you showed his emotions.
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